Sonntag, 30. September 2007

Second attempt with the first homework

My second attempt with the first English homework:

Pursuit of happiness…

[Introduction]

Think of a warm, cloudy day in the middle of spring. Everyone’s good humoured, everyone is smiling. A gentle breeze is blowing through your hair. The sound of cheerful chirping birds comes to your ears.

[Main text]

I do not need much to be happy, just a nice day and a football. I just enjoy the time with a football right beside my feet spending all my energy in the best game ever invented. It makes your head free of sorrows free of all thoughts anyway, you just feel this special feeling which I only feel while playing football. One of the biggest advantages in football is that it’s a team sport. Even if you’re not playing well, its great fun to play and it keeps you fit. It’s a good way to keep you good looking (if you're not too ugly :P) and sportive. If you’re in an awful mood, football will help you. It’s like a medicine, a miracle drug, it’s just amazing. I like to feel the eternal freedom while playing this awesome game. I hope I can see you soon, playing this game.

[In the end]

Hopefully Guenter (especially him) enjoyed the read, since I know he is hard to please.

I think I just used simple vocabulary this time.

~Yours Mr Showing Off

Samstag, 22. September 2007

First real homework; Pursuit of happiness

How I pursue happiness…

…First of all, I don’t really pursue happiness, but in this text I have to write about something.

I think that a way for me to pursue happiness could be by eating. Eating is a good way to pursue happiness I think, but this is not the only way to do so. I don’t spend all my time eating, because this’d be unhealthy (and expensive too).

Everything is good in moderation.

I just enjoy the time with a football next to my feet and spending all my energy on the best game ever invented. It makes your head free of any cogitations, free of sorrows. I just enjoy the eternal freedom while playing.

Any kind of sport makes me happy in a way.

The third thing is, that you need friends who never let you down, friends keep you alive!

The fourth and last thing in this text: "is money”. Money can fix some of your problems, like giving you the feeling of security, saving you from starvation and so on. But you need all those things to be happy, if one is missing you won’t feel happiness.

192 words so far, this should be enough; I’ll stop this tragedy at this point.

Hopefully you enjoyed reading it…

And if you didn’t fall asleep while reading, please show this with a positive comment ;)

P.S. negative comments will not be accepted, it will only cause a spamming from my side

Yours

ME ... well it's corrected now, like you told me to do

So...
des would be mine erschte homework.. halt this blog ins interneta putten...

plax nur positive comments ;)