How I pursue happiness…
…First of all, I don’t really pursue happiness, but in this text I have to write about something.
I think that a way for me to pursue happiness could be by eating. Eating is a good way to pursue happiness I think, but this is not the only way to do so. I don’t spend all my time eating, because this’d be unhealthy (and expensive too).
Everything is good in moderation.
I just enjoy the time with a football next to my feet and spending all my energy on the best game ever invented. It makes your head free of any cogitations, free of sorrows. I just enjoy the eternal freedom while playing.
Any kind of sport makes me happy in a way.
The third thing is, that you need friends who never let you down, friends keep you alive!
The fourth and last thing in this text: "is money”. Money can fix some of your problems, like giving you the feeling of security, saving you from starvation and so on. But you need all those things to be happy, if one is missing you won’t feel happiness.
192 words so far, this should be enough; I’ll stop this tragedy at this point.
Hopefully you enjoyed reading it…
And if you didn’t fall asleep while reading, please show this with a positive comment ;)
P.S. negative comments will not be accepted, it will only cause a spamming from my side
Yours
ME ... well it's corrected now, like you told me to do
4 Kommentare:
Yeah, that's a nice homework.
Whaaaaaaaattttttsssss uuuuuuuppppppp!!!!!
You have good examples but instead of writing about 3 it would be better to focus on one and explain your ideas in more detail. If there is more detail, then you can show off your vocabulary more and your writing skills in general. - Look at the more detailed correction on Ilias3.
Oh...
When i saw this correction i was just surprised, i didn't think that i've got that much mistakes. o.o
And i just laughed at that "showing off" part in your comment. It's simply not true^^.
I try to write a homework with one detailed topic.
~ Mr "Showing off"
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